Feedback!!

This is some points of feedback i received from my newspaper title.



This is what it look liked.




Some good points and some which needed improving:

GOOD POINTS:

• nice colour coordination
• proffesionall looking
• Neat
• word basildon shows its a local newspaper
• small letters changing to caps makes it look proffesional
• Looks neat
• Very appropriate and relevant font/colours

BAD POINTS:

• Date is blurry
• The website is hard to read
• website is too small to read
• Date is unclear
• 23rd and 2011 need a space
• Hard to read font or font size